It stays the same

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Brain pain

     It’s always the same

        Driving me crazy

    Totally insane

        The sight of your image

              The sound of your name

  Brings a bought

              More brain pain

           Haunting my nights

                           Ruling my days

       All you offer

               Is to my

                      Brain pain

           

JRB/1/10

                      It stays the same

2 comments so far

This is a fantastic piece of work. Well written with the rhyming structure fitting perfectly alongside the format. My eyes jumped from line to line, and your flow was great. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Shannon "iwrestledabear..
February 2nd, 2010 at 4:47 pm

I agree with shannon. and I loved this as well!

Taylor H.
February 2nd, 2010 at 4:48 pm

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