An empty life is no life

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  I inhale at your discourse,

          a furious, increasingly, embracing, undertone.

                       From the clouds of my mind,

          and yet I cherish every sigh that I make.   

 

   So expertly given,

        so encompassing,

                          so alive,

I live.

 

You have caressed me so divinely,

      I feel your presence in the depths of my being,

             and long for more,

 please never deny me.

 

 Obtainable entities of love,

         they move behaving in a way,

                  which is impossible to predict.

                              

 Through all spheres of their existence.

                           they are drifting dexterously,

      often without being noticed or seen by others;

               

 To limitations and boundaries unknown to their selves,

                   they experience a tragedy,

                              they love.

 

 

 

JRB/1/10

               

                      An empty life is no life,

 

3 comments so far

I love the title becoming the last line. Very effective and so true. Nicely done…

sue
January 28th, 2010 at 1:22 pm

sometimes, when we forget how to feel, we read the emotions in someone else’s words, or in the lyrics of a song, for a moment we feel ourselves adrift in something we remember but locked away somewhere

words like these

Emily Burns
February 2nd, 2010 at 5:09 pm

they experience a tragedy,
they love,
a whirlpool of emotions,lovely,

SAHAR
February 2nd, 2010 at 5:10 pm

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