Such a beautiful thought . . . gave my day a beautiful start.

Such a dreamy, hauntingly beautiful write.

What a sweet write of love researching out to love missing and found. Enjoyed the read and the tone of the write was thoughtful.

Very beautiful thoughts. dreamy, deep and powerful. I love the ending lines. Excellent story…

Keep up the good work, nice read it was lovely, sweet and open,,hearted

She must be a very special woman and very lucky, this was a dreamy and thoughtful write loved it.

I agree its dreamy, deep and powerful very nice write, she is a lucky woman,

Just perhaps tonight she shall find dreams much sweeter than those dreams in her awakening hours. (love this line) a beautiful longing the hope of a breakthrough to reveal hidden treasures. very lovely

cute. but wayyyy to long for my short attention span :p (but thats my fault,not yours!)LOL

A lot of hopes wrapped up in one tale, a longing to find again what once was. In life though it is far too easy to trace the steps that you once walked and treacherous to actually do so. We grew from love, pass on our love to our own children and hope that they too will learn to love and be loved by their fellow man.

This was a very thoughtful piece. It showes such sweet emotions. Whoever this lady is- she is very lucky! Great job!

This could be for the love of someone else or in the finding of oneself which was lost. It could be a bringing together of two lost souls looking for the light. A nice read; soft and dreamy.

wow… I Love the last line.. its like stepping off a extremely high ledge hoping that there’s some nice fluffyness at the bottom..
very beautiful peice.
I loved it!!!

Damn, that was seriously amazing…like a vivid dream you captivated your reader! Beautifully written!

I think I read this earlier today. And finding that I had left a review I probably went away without a comment. Your read request brought me back today. There is something about your words lately that draws me back again and again. It isn’t hard to infer from your words that something powerful is moving through your life. We are blessed that you share the experience with us here. Your voice is so rich and full of love lately. It is a pleasure to stop and read again.

OOOh WOW!! this was so amazing, emotions and love are such powerful things
sometimes comes at a time when you least expect it, or a time when not appropriate to feel it, some may question are you sure you want to act on it? and some may say go with it!! this was beautiful and a bit sad at the same time, that is my interpetation on it anyway.. either way it was outstanding..

Beautiful…. I loved the emotion and everything in it!

I kind of like how the woman described above is neither tangible or intangible. She just is. That being the case, this could be a metaphor for pretty much anything. I also like the confessional tone you use here, as though this is something you’ve been keeping locket away and only now do you tell us. This is also very relatable–anyone can read this and identify with the longing, lonliness, and heartache. Really good stuff, man.

She reminds me of… A Phenomenal Woman. Pure beauty and sincerity that shines through. Also, I think this piece of yours is a delight, and can be made into a short story, because for me, that’s what it does. It tells of a story, and its just wonderful.:)

Pure Beauty… every word makes me dream… so ((( Romantico )))!!!
Your mind is thinking…about Love
so this tells me that…
You can write a storie of love..
with a happy ending…Yes
Ciao !!!

Beautiful, i think this might be one of the best things i have read by you, and you have written some really good stuff. nice job.

Amazing. Beautiful write. I’m kinda speechless by this write. I liked it alot.

Very nice. I like the imagery that was used.

A passionate write. I believe it flows more when you say “she is” — i like that. You are determining her identity. Awesome!

Wow that was beautiful.

This is simply magnificent and well-written. Two thumbs up! You’ve clearly portrayed a woman’s beauty and vibrance without exaggerating your point. This is a passionate piece that is worth any person’s time. Reading it has been a pleasure.

lovely. very lovely.

Love does tend to make us feel all these feelings and more. We have a hard time separating it all in our minds.

You use a great deal of imagery, beautiful thoughts all of them. I found the images ran together. Perhaps re-formulating this piece into poetry might give the reader a better flow through the ideas presented.

I felt rather like all the wonderful ideals of love were put into a kettle and stirred.

If there is an intended woman this piece is for I’m sure she is deeply touched by your love.

Wow is what I have to say out of so many that I have seen of your writing this is beautiful and perfectly well done and written…I think the inner soul can make you know what to feel see and trust…Its holds a bond between your inner self and who you are and what your heart desires inside and out..Very well done I reall like this a lot 100 for you keep up the great work God Bless

Its beautiful how you depict her, and your want to be with her. Intimate, great work, mishel

Inner passion leads a person to the wanting to know what lies on the other side. When the soul starts being pulled, the vulnerability becomes the deciding factor. She sounds as if she fills an empty room with intrigue and yearning. This is a good write, well expressed with questions being left as my mind wonders about her thought process. I like to be left with questions and this writing did just that!

Excellent use of language & repetition. There were many lines that stood out to me and overall this was a strong work.

hope is next to love. they share a neighborhood in the land of sweet destiny…bravo to you great poet!

She is a woman, she is a child, she is a mother, and she is a daughter. She is life, hope, and most of all; she is success in the face of defeat. For her years of silence are now like a star that has kissed the sweetness of my living soul, in the memory of my fading life. Darkness gives way to the light of hope, shining brighter as the days go by.

A poetic mantra, the above lines. There is such depth to this piece. So often I close my eyes and see nothing but darkness.
A beautiful write

very strong work.
This is a great piece of writing.

Wow. That is really the only word I have to describe this piece. It really hit a chord with me right now. This is exactly what I needed to read tonight. This piece brought so many images, emotions, and thoughts to my mind. Definitely one of my favorites. You created a brilliant story!

this was amazing! It flowed so well i couldnt tell if it was a poem or a story. This was fantastic and I drew me in big time. I love your word choices as well. Great job!

A very nice tribute